Graham's+better+ending

Dear Amy, Sandancer had her colt last night at chore time, I called the vet and the colt just made it. It was a girl so I named her after you Amy. It turns out that it was just some friends of the Turlows living in their cabin. When I found out, to tell the truth I didn't feel disapponted. I told everyone about you and Josh. Mom and I planted two trees in the back yard for you and Josh. Mom has decided to stay for a while, she likes doing the chores you know, I think it relaxes her.I wish you where here amy it would make evrything easier! I miss you I miss you I miss you Love your friend forever!

Kate

Hi Graham, Thank you for completing your better ending. I am glad the colt made it! As a reader, I feel emotionally engaged. The birth of any creature is a powerful moment! I understand you are informing the reader that someone is missed. Be careful to continue to use appropriate structure at all times. I think that using the letter as a closing piece is a very good choice. well done! I am glad you enjoyed the novel and hope that working with your peers made this an enjoyable experience. Ms C

Hi Ms C I am responding I just wanted to tell you that Kates part in the book is most of the time a letter ! I am just responding to the pomem I chose. You should read this book.

Graham